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RE: Outwitters Fan-Fiction! - stevewastaken - 08-14-2012 11:35 AM
(08-12-2012 11:31 PM)swimj Wrote: Love it! Except, if the adorables are on the land, then why is their special a whale?
At one time, all 3 teams lived in peace.
Mobi was a Scallywag at the time, and his love affair with Bombshell was famous across the land. They even had a celebrity couple nickname: Bombi.
Over time, Scrambler grew envious of their love, and scrambled Mobi's brain, turning him into a Feedback. This sparked a great war between Feedback and Scallywag. Bombshell would not rest until Mobi was back in his loving claws.
The war culminated with brainwashed Mobi and Scrambler (Scrambi) on the brink of destroying Bombshell and the entire Scallywag race... But Mobi couldn't do it. A force in the back of his mind knew this was wrong, and his ravaged brain twisted and thrust itself through his skull and into the shape of a horn. Terrified, Mobi fled the battlefield. (because the defender has the advantage in Outwitters, Scallywags were able to push back the Mobiless Feedback).
Mobi went into exile, and he swam to a mystical island. Here he found the peaceful Adorables. They too were insane, and Mobi knew he had found his new home. But it wouldn't be long before both Bombshell and Scrambler had tracked Mobi to the island. Their love for Mobi had not wavered, and each desperately wanted him back.
But Mobi was a new whale. He pleaded with Bombshell and Scrambler to live in peace once again. An argument quickly escalated into a fight. Bombshell and Scrambler attacked one another with everything. Mobi dove between them, unable to bear the thought of either of his loves dead. The combined attacks of Bombshell and Scrambler killed Mobi...
Bombshell and Scrambler blamed each other for Mobi's death, and a massive battle broke out between them. The poor peaceful Adorables were being kill left and right in the crossfire. They could do nothing but cry.
The tears flowed so relentlessly that they formed a puddle, then a pool, then a lake. A terrible shriek echoed across the island. Bombshell and Scrambler stopped to find the source, but saw nothing. Then, ever so slowly, a winged horned whale rose from the lake.
It was Mobi, reborn from the lake as an angel of death. If Bombshell and Scrambler could not live in peace, Mobi would see to it that they and their people would all die. Mobi teleported all the Adorables to his side. Inspired by his rage, they too felt the power of vengeance flow through their veins.
Bombshell and Scrambler had no choice but to flee and prepare for the coming onslaught.
Or so I've heard.
RE: Outwitters Fan-Fiction! - CombatEX - 08-15-2012 04:22 AM
The following should explain how all the different matchups occur in 1v1 and the different team compositions in 2v2. It also sheds some light on how Scallywags have advanced weaponry (artillery) and the Feedback have the technologically impressive mind-control ability while the Adorables are lacking in this regard (the mobi has an amazing, but natural ability opposed to the advanced technology of the other races).
Factions are listed at bottom of post.
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On a distant planet lived a race of bear-like creatures who branded their nation the 'Adorables'. They had a natural affinity with the planet's other wildlife and sought to uplift the brightest species to sentience. Thus one by one other land-dwelling creatures were brought up and nurtured to a high level of intelligence - from the snakes and elephants of Sweetie Plains to the whales of Blitz Beach - and were subsequently adopted into The Adorable Nation as equals.
Unbeknownst to the creatures of the land, deep beneath the ocean lived an ancient civilization - the Scallywags. In order to survive in the harsh depths of the ocean the Scallywags were tested to their limits and as a result experienced rapid technological advancements. Among these advancements was their greatest creation - the Feedback. The Feedback were a collection of robotic creatures intended to be used as servants and laborers, however some Scallywags had a different use in mind.
Ever since the discovery of syrup - a valuable resource found only on land and long used by the Adorables as a delicacy and energy source - the Scallywags had put their greatest scientific minds to work on travel to and the eventual colonization of the land above the ocean. However after this technological breakthrough had been reached, there was much disagreement on how to proceed. Most of the Scallywags pushed for a peaceful exchange with the Adorables, but others had different intentions. A vote was proposed, the result of which would determine peace or war with the Adorables.
In the coming months it became clear that those pushing for peace would be victorious when it came time for the final vote to be held. Aware of their impending loss in the decision, the dissenters - or Rebels as they are now called - formed a secret army. As their numbers were vastly inferior to those who supported peace, they drew upon a valuable asset, the Feedback. Outfitting these docile servants of the Scallywags with weaponry, these machines became powerful vessels of destruction.
The day of the vote arrived and with it joyous celebration by peace-loving Scallywags and Adorables alike. Unfortunately they would soon discover this peace would be short-lived. A mere week later, the war began.
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Okay so now I could probably write a book about the escalation of the war but... not right now =/
Maybe I'll come back to this later, but I'll just outline the rest briefly here
The Scallywag rebels brand themselves as The Scallywag Empire and push their agenda - the glory of the great Scallywag race. Under this new banner they hope to gain the support of other Scallywags.
So essentially the rebel Scallywags and the Feedback they commandeered for their cause attack the Adorables. This was shortly after the peace treaty was struck so it comes as a huge shock to the Adorables who strike back in retaliation. Unfortunately the majority of the Scallywags are innocent and as a result are outraged. After some time the Scallywags realize what has happened, namely, the war between the two nations began as a result of a misunderstanding due to the actions of the rebels. Eventually the peace-loving Scallywags - or Loyalists as they are now called - push to mend the relationship between Scallywags and Adorables. After explaining the situation to the Adorables and a subsequent investigation proves the validity of the Loyalist's claims, peace is restored.
The Scallywag Loyalists and The Adorable Nation band together as The Alliance to defeat The Scallywag Empire.
Now for the Feedback. As longtime servants of their creators, they have been complacent with their position at the side of their masters. They worked for their creators and their creators cared for them as a result. However after a some of the Feedback were stolen and outfitted for war, new possibilities were placed before them. The Feedback in the rebel Scallywag army (or The Scallywag Empire as they are now called) were often ordered to fire upon Scallywag loyalists. As a result, the once powerful bond between these Feedback and the Scallywag race which created them became greatly weakened. Some of these Feedback decided that the time was right to break free from their former masters and form a powerful nation of their own.
Thus the Feedback Freedom Fighters (FFF) was formed by those who wished to live autonomously while those who remained loyal to the Scallywags were branded Feedback Loyalists.
Oh and... Some Adorables (now referred to as the Raiders) took advantage of the war between Scallywag Rebels and The Adorable Nation to seize land and syrup reserves.
Yea sorry I got lazy at the end... I might come back to this later.
The Factions
The Alliance
Defenders of the peace.
Scallywag Loyalists
Feedback Loyalists
The Adorable Nation
The Scallywag Empire
For the glory of the Scallywags.
Scallywag Rebels
Feedback Rebels
Feedback Freedom Fighters
In the name of freedom.
Adorable Raiders
Steal from the rich and give to the poor... wait, we steal from them too.
Matchups
1v1
Adorables vs Adorables
Adorable Raiders vs The Adorable Nation
Adorables vs Feedback
The Adorable Nation vs Feedback Rebels
Adorables vs Scallywags
The Adorable Nation vs Scallywag Rebels
Feedback vs Feedback
Feedback Freedom Fighters vs Feedback Loyalists
Feedback Freedom Fighters vs Feedback Rebels
Feedback vs Scallywags
Feedback Freedom Fighters vs Scallywag Rebels
Feedback Freedom Fighters vs Scallywag Loyalists
Feedback Rebels vs Scallywag Loyalists
Feedback Loyalists vs Scallywag Rebels
Scallywags vs Scallywags
Scallywag Loyalists vs Scallywag Rebels
2v2 Teams
Adorables and Scallywags
The Adorable Nation and Scallywag Loyalists
Adorables and Feedback
The Adorable Nation and Feedback Loyalists
Feedback and Scallywags
Feedback Loyalists and Scallywag Loyalists
RE: Outwitters Fan-Fiction! - brayton - 12-28-2012 12:29 PM
id like for the story to include the adorables to be communist with a freedom fighting party vieing for control and of course freedom.
the adorables only look happy, they are really sad on the inside under communist rule, giving them conscription and forcing them to live with nearly notbhing as the great (korean) cat overlord demands almost everything they have through tax, leavingg the people dirt poor.
i also think mabey that
scallywags were shuned from society, and as such had to be adapted to living on land instead of the great under sea city(ies). even after the shunning and the revolutions the scallywags met, this expelled pirate faction excells in supplying resources found in the abovre world to the other factions, outside of these wars.
i also think genectic modification and the robots being engineered by a race- possibly the game keeper(NPC with axe) could have set it all up from his mastermind dimension.
or that humans either went extinct, were testing and modifing creatures, built robots until the disaster. there are now few humans left, in places far from the setting of outwitters, in distant planets and in space. some humans bred with such genectically modified creatures after the collaapse(event that wiped ot empire, virus, robots, war, catashrophe) and after time became these creatures, with the robots feeding and destroying worlds, the sad hopeless controlled adorables fighting the government and being conscriped to war, the expelled mercinarry scally wags defending territories when the cruel adorable government attacked and the exoctic plants in the karethiki jungles rarely seen.
mabey